My Trip To The Beach

Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when we can use describing words.

In the weekend my family and I went to the beach.
I swam in the warm water.I could smell the salty air. I saw sea shells and they sparkled in the sun. The big waves splashed on the sand. We had rice and chicken for lunch. I was tired because it was hot.
I had fun at the beach. We packed up and went back home.
                                                     By Enzo