Persuasive Text

 Learning goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria:  I know I can do this when I can express my point of view and support it with evidence.

I don't think we should eat too much chocolate because it is full of sugar. It will make us feel sick. It will also rot our teeth and will make us fat. If we eat too much chocolate we will get over weight and will not able to run or do any work. I think it is okay to eat chocolate sometimes as a treat.

                                                                                  By Nixcent

Persuasive Text

 Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can express my my point of view and support it with evidence.

I think eating too much chocolate will make us feel sick. It has too much sugar in it. It will rot our teeth and will make us fat. It think it is ok to eat chocolate sometimes as a treat.

                                                                     By Jazzmin

Persuasive Text

 Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can express my point of view and support it with evidence.

Eating too much chocolate will make us fat. It will rot our teeth. We will also get over weight and will not be able to run. It is okay to eat chocolate sometimes as a treat.

                                                                   By Patrick

Persuasive Text

 Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can express my point of view and support it with evidence.

I don't think we should eat chocolate because it will rot our teeth. It is full of sugar and it will make us feel sick. If you eat too much chocolate you will be over weight and unhealthy. So keep away from chocolate.

                                                                                By Kava 

Persuasive Text

 Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.

success criteria: I know I can do this when I can express my point of view and support it with evidence.

I think eating too much chocolate is unhealthy. It will rot our teeth and we will get fat. I think eating chocolate sometimes as a treat is okay.

                                                                        By Isi

Persuasive Text

 Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can express my point my of view and support it with evidence.

I think eating chocolate is unhealthy. It is full of sugar and will make us fat. I think eating chocolate sometimes as a treat is okay.

                                                                       By Nithesh

Persuasive Text

 

Learning Goal:  We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can express my point of view.

I think chocolate is unhealthy because it is full of sugar. Eating too much chocolate will make you fat and rot your teeth. I think it is okay to eat chocolate sometimes as a treat.

                                                                               By Bryson

Why Eating Chocolate is Bad?

 Learning Goal:  We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria: I know I can do this when I express my point of view and support it with evidence.

I think eating too much chocolate is unhealthy. If we  eat chocolate everyday our teeth will rot. We will get fat and we will not be able to run fast. I think it is okay to eat chocolate sometimes as a treat.

                                                                      By Thalia

Why Eating Chocolate is Bad?

 Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria:  I know I can do this when I can express my point of view and support it with evidence.

I think we should not eat chocolate everyday because it will make us fat. It will rot our teeth. We will not be able to run or jump. I think eating chocolate sometimes as a treat is ok.

                                                                             By Douglas

Why Eating Chocolate id Bad?

Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can express my point of view and support it with evidence.

I think that eating too much chocolate is unhealthy. Eating chocolate everyday will make you fat. It will rot your teeth. I think that we should eat chocolate only sometimes as a treat.

                                                                                By Nanda

 

Why Eating Chocolate is Bad?

Learning Goal:     We are learning to write a persuasive text. 

Success Criteria:    I know I can do this when I can express my point of view and support it with evidence.

Eating too much chocolate will make us sick. It is too sweet and it will rot our teeth. We will get overweight and we will not be able to run. If you want to stay healthy, keep away from the chocolate. 

                                                                                     By Zenalia

Why Is Cutting Down Trees Bad?

Learning Intention: I am learning to write a persuasive text using information to persuade readers my point of view is right.

I believe that people should not chop down trees because we will not have oxygen to breathe. The animals will have no home and they will become extinct. 
I believe that people should stop cutting down trees.
                                                By Mika

Why Is Cutting Down Trees Bad?

Learning Intention: I am learning to write a persuasive text using information to persuade readers my point of view is right.

I believe that people should not cut down trees because we will not have oxygen to breathe. There will be no home for the animals and birds. 

                                         By Alyvia

Why Is Cutting Down Trees Bad?

Learning Intention: I am learning to write a persuasive text using information to persuade readers my point of view is right.

I believe people should not cut down trees because we will have no oxygen to breathe. There will be no home for the animals. I believe cutting down trees should not be allowed.

                                                 By Joyla

Why Is Cutting Down Trees Bad?

Learning Intention: I am learning to write a persuasive text using information to persuade readers my point of view is right.

I believe that people should not cut down trees because the animals will have no home. We will not have oxygen to breathe. 

Please do not cut down trees.

                                                  By Justin

Why Is Cutting Down Trees Bad?

Learning Intention: I am learning to write a persuasive text using information to persuade readers my point of view is right.

I believe that people should not chop down trees because we will have no shade and oxygen to breathe. When we cut down trees the birds will have no home.  The birds will migrate to another country. 

Please do not cut down trees.

                                                         By Laura

Why Is Cutting Down Trees Bad?

Learning Intention: I am learning to write a persuasive text using information to persuade readers my point of view is right.

I believe that people should not chop down trees because we will not have oxygen to breathe. There will be no home for the animals. The birds will have no where to build their nests. 

I believe that chopping down trees should not be allowed.

                                                        By Isaac 

Why Is Cutting Down Trees Bad?

Learning Intention: I am learning to write a persuasive text using information to persuade readers my point of view is right.

I believe people should not chop down trees  because we will not have oxygen to breathe. People destroy the animals home. There are lots of animals become extinct. The birds will migrate to another country. There will be no food for the poor people who live in the rainforest.
I believe that chopping down trees should not be allowed.
                                         By Sililo

Why is Cutting Down Trees Bad?

Learning Intention: I am learning to write a persuasive text using information to persuade readers my point of view is right.

I believe that people should not chop down trees because people will not have oxygen to breathe. People destroy animals' home. There are lots of animals become extinct. The birds will migrate to another country because we cut down their homes.
I believe that cutting down trees should not be allowed. 
                                                    By Nino

Why is Cutting Down Trees Bad?

Learning Intention: I am learning to write a persuasive text using information to persuade readers my point of view is right.

People should not chop down trees because we will not have oxygen to breathe. People destroy the animals and birds' home. There are lots of  animals become extinct because of this. 

I believe that chopping down tress should not be allowed.

                                          By Johannah