Christmas Trees

Room 2 have made Christmas Trees to take home. They enjoyed painting and decorating them with colourful pom poms and sparkles.

Persuasive Text

 Learning goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria:  I know I can do this when I can express my point of view and support it with evidence.

I don't think we should eat too much chocolate because it is full of sugar. It will make us feel sick. It will also rot our teeth and will make us fat. If we eat too much chocolate we will get over weight and will not able to run or do any work. I think it is okay to eat chocolate sometimes as a treat.

                                                                                  By Nixcent

Persuasive Text

 Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can express my my point of view and support it with evidence.

I think eating too much chocolate will make us feel sick. It has too much sugar in it. It will rot our teeth and will make us fat. It think it is ok to eat chocolate sometimes as a treat.

                                                                     By Jazzmin

Persuasive Text

 Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can express my point of view and support it with evidence.

Eating too much chocolate will make us fat. It will rot our teeth. We will also get over weight and will not be able to run. It is okay to eat chocolate sometimes as a treat.

                                                                   By Patrick

Persuasive Text

 Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can express my point of view and support it with evidence.

I don't think we should eat chocolate because it will rot our teeth. It is full of sugar and it will make us feel sick. If you eat too much chocolate you will be over weight and unhealthy. So keep away from chocolate.

                                                                                By Kava 

Persuasive Text

 Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.

success criteria: I know I can do this when I can express my point of view and support it with evidence.

I think eating too much chocolate is unhealthy. It will rot our teeth and we will get fat. I think eating chocolate sometimes as a treat is okay.

                                                                        By Isi

Persuasive Text

 Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can express my point my of view and support it with evidence.

I think eating chocolate is unhealthy. It is full of sugar and will make us fat. I think eating chocolate sometimes as a treat is okay.

                                                                       By Nithesh

Persuasive Text

 Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria:  I know I can do this when I can express my point of view and support it with evidence.

I think eating chocolate everyday is unhealthy. It will rot our teeth and make us fat. I think that eating chocolate sometimes as a treat is okay.                                                                    

                                                                                    by Jacob

Persuasive Text

Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria:  I know I can do this when I can express my point of view and support it with evidence.

I think eating chocolate is unhealthy . It is full of sugar and it will rot your teeth. Eating too much chocolate will make you fat. So keep away from chocolate.

                                                                          by Francesca

Persuasive Text

 

Learning Goal:  We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can express my point of view.

I think chocolate is unhealthy because it is full of sugar. Eating too much chocolate will make you fat and rot your teeth. I think it is okay to eat chocolate sometimes as a treat.

                                                                               By Bryson

Persuasive Text

 

Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria:  I know I can do this when I can express my point of view.

I don't think we should eat chocolate everyday. It will make us fat and you teeth will rot. So keep away from chocolate.

                                                                         by Ezekiel 

Why Eating Chocolate is bad?

 Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can express my point of view and support it with evidence.

I think eating chocolate is not good for us. Do you know it is full of sugar? It will rot our teeth. It will make us fat. And we will not be able to run or play rugby. It is ok to eat chocolate sometimes as a treat.                                                                

                                                                                  By Paula

Why Eating Chocolate is Bad?

 Learning Goal:  We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria: I know I can do this when I express my point of view and support it with evidence.

I think eating too much chocolate is unhealthy. If we  eat chocolate everyday our teeth will rot. We will get fat and we will not be able to run fast. I think it is okay to eat chocolate sometimes as a treat.

                                                                      By Thalia

Why Eating Chocolate is Bad?

 Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria:  I know I can do this when I can express my point of view and support it with evidence.

I think we should not eat chocolate everyday because it will make us fat. It will rot our teeth. We will not be able to run or jump. I think eating chocolate sometimes as a treat is ok.

                                                                             By Douglas

Why Eating Chocolate id Bad?

Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can express my point of view and support it with evidence.

I think that eating too much chocolate is unhealthy. Eating chocolate everyday will make you fat. It will rot your teeth. I think that we should eat chocolate only sometimes as a treat.

                                                                                By Nanda