My Trip To The Beach

Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.

Success criteria: We can do this when we can use describing  words.
In the weekend my family and I went to the beach. 
The sand was hot. I felt the sand gritty between my toes. I saw the waves crashed on the sand. I heard the seagulls squawked in the sky. The seashells sparkled in the sun. We went for a swim. I felt cold and shivering and goose bumps.
 I had a great and fun day at the beach.
                                            By Eldrich