My Trip To The Beach

Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when we can use describing  words.

In the weekend my family and I went to the beach. 
I made a sand castle like the Sky Tower. I swam and splashed in the warm water with my sister. We had  yummy chicken and chips for lunch. It was a hot day. We were tired.
We packed up and went back home.
                                                 By Michael