My Family Trip To The Beach

Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.

Success criteria: We can do this when we can use describing  words.
In the weekend my family and I went to the beach. 
When we got there we ran on the sand and it was hot. I went for a swim. I felt cold and goose bumps. The waves splashed on the sand. The sea shells sparkled in the sun. I heard the seagulls squawked in the sky. I ate sausages and it tasted like pork. I had ice-cream and it looked like a mountain because it had three scoops on the cone.
I had a fun day at the beach. 
                                                By Joyla

My Trip To The Beach

Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.

Success criteria: We can do this when we can use describing  words.
In the weekend my family and I went to the beach. My mum and my dad and I played catch in the sand and I felt the sand gritty between my toes. I splashed and swam in the warm water. The waves swished me away from my dad.
We had fun at the beach
                                                   By Matalena 

My Trip To The Beach

Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.

Success criteria: We can do this when we can use describing  words.
In the weekend my family and I went to the beach. 
The sand was hot. I felt the sand gritty between my toes. I saw the waves crashed on the sand. I heard the seagulls squawked in the sky. The seashells sparkled in the sun. We went for a swim. I felt cold and shivering and goose bumps.
 I had a great and fun day at the beach.
                                            By Eldrich
                                                                

My Trip To The Beach

Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when we can use describing  words.

In the weekend my family and I went to the beach. 
I made a sand castle like the Sky Tower. I swam and splashed in the warm water with my sister. We had  yummy chicken and chips for lunch. It was a hot day. We were tired.
We packed up and went back home.
                                                 By Michael

My Trip To The Beach

Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when we can use describing words.

In the weekend my family and I went to the beach.
I swam in the warm water.I could smell the salty air. I saw sea shells and they sparkled in the sun. The big waves splashed on the sand. We had rice and chicken for lunch. I was tired because it was hot.
I had fun at the beach. We packed up and went back home.
                                                     By Enzo

My Trip To The Beach

Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when we can use describing words.

In the weekend my family and I went to the beach. 
We played in the sand. The sand got in my togs. It tickled my skin. The big waves crashed on the sand. We had taro cooked in coconut cream and crispy  chicken for lunch.
We were all tired and went back home.
                                               By Grace  

My Family Trip To The Beach

Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when We can use describing  words.

In the weekend my family and I went to the beach.
I went for a swim because it was hot. The water was warm. The sand was hot. The waves splashed on the sand.  I picked up a jelly fish and it was slimy in my hands. We had delicious lunch. The sausages were tasted like pork. 
We all had fun at the beach.
                                                       By Feao

My Trip To The Beach

 Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.

Success criteria: We can do this when we can use describing words.

My family and I went to the beach.

 We ran into the water. I was dancing and splashing in the warm water. The waves crashed on the sand. My mum bought strawberry ice cream and it was yummy.

We had a great day.

                                                  By Akesa

My Trip To The Beach

In the weekend my family and I went to the beach. 
I was splashing in the cold water. I saw big waves. I made a sand castle and I put a sail on it. It looked like a boat. 
I had fun at the beach.
                                                    By Ion