Wednesday, 21 March 2018

My Trip To The Beach

 Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.

Success criteria: We can do this when we can use describing words.

My family and I went to the beach.
 We ran into the water. I was dancing and splashing in the warm water. The waves crashed on the sand. My mum bought strawberry ice cream and it was yummy.
We had a great day.
                                                  By Akesa

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