Why Littering at The Beach is Bad?

Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.
Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can express my point of view and support it with evidence. 

I believe that littering at the beach is gross. When you throw ropes at the beach the sea creatures will get tangled and they will die. The plastic bags are nasty because they get stuck over the heads of the turtles and dolphins. They suffocated and die. 
I suggest that everyone should take their rubbish home after they use the beach.
                                                     By Akesa