Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when we can use describing words.In Room 2 we can hear the noisy cars and loud trucks. It sounds like a thundering noise as they fly past. It smells stinky and smokey.
By Matalena
Great job Matalena. I like your writing.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Room two my name is Tuishaly and I go to Kawakawa primary school and I really like that you are talking about all the noise coming from the road and all the smoke that comes from the cars, I beat it is annoying with all that smoke flying pass.
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