Tuesday, 8 May 2018

The Noisy Traffic

Learning goalWe are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when we can use describing  words.

In Room 2 we can hear the noisy cars and loud trucks. It sounds like a thundering noise as they fly past. It smells stinky and smokey. 
                                           By Matalena 


  1. Great job Matalena. I like your writing.

  2. Kia ora Room two my name is Tuishaly and I go to Kawakawa primary school and I really like that you are talking about all the noise coming from the road and all the smoke that comes from the cars, I beat it is annoying with all that smoke flying pass.