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Tuesday, 29 March 2011

Trip To The Zoo


On the weekend my family and I went to the Zoo to see the animals. I liked the baby animals because they are cute. I saw an elephant. I gave a peanut to the elephant he liked it.

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  1. Thank you for sharing your recount Gabby. I am pleased you had fun at the Zoo. It is wonderful to see that you are writing complex sentences and giving your reader more detail.

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  2. Gabby
    I really like your story and the cool picture you drew especially the elephant. Have you been to the Zoo before?
    Mrs Manickum
    Room 5
    St Patrick's

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  3. cool story gabby i hope you liked your trip to the zoo. hope you go again. naanise and nia

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  4. cool story i love the zoo

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  5. nice story Gabby. awesome

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  6. wow, that is
    the coolest picture ever

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  7. the zoo is fun i like all the animals there they are soooo cute

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  8. cool story gabby i loved it and i love the zoo hope i an go because you have inspired me too

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