Persuasive Text

Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria:  I know I can do this when I can express my point of view and support it with evidence.

I think eating chocolate is unhealthy . It is full of sugar and it will rot your teeth. Eating too much chocolate will make you fat. So keep away from chocolate.

                                                                          by Francesca

Persuasive Text

 

Learning Goal:  We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can express my point of view.

I think chocolate is unhealthy because it is full of sugar. Eating too much chocolate will make you fat and rot your teeth. I think it is okay to eat chocolate sometimes as a treat.

                                                                               By Bryson

Persuasive Text

 

Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria:  I know I can do this when I can express my point of view.

I don't think we should eat chocolate everyday. It will make us fat and you teeth will rot. So keep away from chocolate.

                                                                         by Ezekiel 

Why Eating Chocolate is bad?

 Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can express my point of view and support it with evidence.

I think eating chocolate is not good for us. Do you know it is full of sugar? It will rot our teeth. It will make us fat. And we will not be able to run or play rugby. It is ok to eat chocolate sometimes as a treat.                                                                

                                                                                  By Paula

Why Eating Chocolate is Bad?

 Learning Goal:  We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria: I know I can do this when I express my point of view and support it with evidence.

I think eating too much chocolate is unhealthy. If we  eat chocolate everyday our teeth will rot. We will get fat and we will not be able to run fast. I think it is okay to eat chocolate sometimes as a treat.

                                                                      By Thalia

Why Eating Chocolate is Bad?

 Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria:  I know I can do this when I can express my point of view and support it with evidence.

I think we should not eat chocolate everyday because it will make us fat. It will rot our teeth. We will not be able to run or jump. I think eating chocolate sometimes as a treat is ok.

                                                                             By Douglas

Why Eating Chocolate id Bad?

Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can express my point of view and support it with evidence.

I think that eating too much chocolate is unhealthy. Eating chocolate everyday will make you fat. It will rot your teeth. I think that we should eat chocolate only sometimes as a treat.

                                                                                By Nanda