Persuasive Text

 Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can express my point of view and support it with evidence.

Eating too much chocolate will make us fat. It will rot our teeth. We will also get over weight and will not be able to run. It is okay to eat chocolate sometimes as a treat.

                                                                   By Patrick

Persuasive Text

 Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can express my point of view and support it with evidence.

I don't think we should eat chocolate because it will rot our teeth. It is full of sugar and it will make us feel sick. If you eat too much chocolate you will be over weight and unhealthy. So keep away from chocolate.

                                                                                By Kava 

Persuasive Text

 Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.

success criteria: I know I can do this when I can express my point of view and support it with evidence.

I think eating too much chocolate is unhealthy. It will rot our teeth and we will get fat. I think eating chocolate sometimes as a treat is okay.

                                                                        By Isi

Persuasive Text

 Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can express my point my of view and support it with evidence.

I think eating chocolate is unhealthy. It is full of sugar and will make us fat. I think eating chocolate sometimes as a treat is okay.

                                                                       By Nithesh

Persuasive Text

 Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria:  I know I can do this when I can express my point of view and support it with evidence.

I think eating chocolate everyday is unhealthy. It will rot our teeth and make us fat. I think that eating chocolate sometimes as a treat is okay.                                                                    

                                                                                    by Jacob

Persuasive Text

Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria:  I know I can do this when I can express my point of view and support it with evidence.

I think eating chocolate is unhealthy . It is full of sugar and it will rot your teeth. Eating too much chocolate will make you fat. So keep away from chocolate.

                                                                          by Francesca

Persuasive Text

 

Learning Goal:  We are learning to write a persuasive text.

Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can express my point of view.

I think chocolate is unhealthy because it is full of sugar. Eating too much chocolate will make you fat and rot your teeth. I think it is okay to eat chocolate sometimes as a treat.

                                                                               By Bryson