Father's Day

Learning intention: I am learning to write a recount .
Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can

• write an orientation
• write what I did in order
• write how I feel 

On father's day my family and I went to Mac Donald to give my dad a surprise party.It was his birthday too. 
We ate crispy fries and burgers. I liked the burgers because it had my favourite lettuce, tomatoes, cucumber pickles and chicken. My dad said thank you for the party.
Then we went home and slept. We had a great party and everyone enjoyed it.
                                                    By Matalena

Rock Pool

Learning Intention: I am learning to name some  sea creatures in rock pools.

This is my rock pool. In my rock pool I have a crab and some sea shells. I have sea weeds and snake lock anemones.
                                                   By Matalena

Why Is Cutting Down Trees Bad?

Learning Intention: I am learning to write a persuasive text using information to persuade readers my point of view is right.

I believe that people should not chop down trees because we will not have oxygen to breathe. The animals and birds will have no home. They will become extinct. There will be no food for the poor people who live in the forest. 
I believe that we should not be allowed to cut down trees.
                                                   By Sulia

Why Is Cutting Down Trees Bad?

Learning Intention: I am learning to write a persuasive text using information to persuade readers my point of view is right.

I believe that people should not chop down trees because we will not have oxygen to breathe. The animals will have no home and they will become extinct. 
I believe that people should stop cutting down trees.
                                                By Mika

Why Is Cutting Down Trees Bad?

Learning Intention: I am learning to write a persuasive text using information to persuade readers my point of view is right.

I believe that people should not cut down trees because we will not have oxygen to breathe. There will be no home for the animals and birds. 

                                         By Alyvia

Why Is Cutting Down Trees Bad?

Learning Intention: I am learning to write a persuasive text using information to persuade readers my point of view is right.

I believe people should not cut down trees because we will have no oxygen to breathe. There will be no home for the animals. I believe cutting down trees should not be allowed.

                                                 By Joyla

Why Is Cutting Down Trees Bad?

Learning Intention: I am learning to write a persuasive text using information to persuade readers my point of view is right.

I believe that people should not cut down trees because the animals will have no home. We will not have oxygen to breathe. 

Please do not cut down trees.

                                                  By Justin

Why Is Cutting Down Trees Bad?

Learning Intention: I am learning to write a persuasive text using information to persuade readers my point of view is right.

I believe that people should not chop down trees because we will have no shade and oxygen to breathe. When we cut down trees the birds will have no home.  The birds will migrate to another country. 

Please do not cut down trees.

                                                         By Laura

Why Is Cutting Down Trees Bad?

Learning Intention: I am learning to write a persuasive text using information to persuade readers my point of view is right.

I believe that people should not chop down trees because we will not have oxygen to breathe. There will be no home for the animals. The birds will have no where to build their nests. 

I believe that chopping down trees should not be allowed.

                                                        By Isaac 

Why Is Cutting Down Trees Bad?

Learning Intention: I am learning to write a persuasive text using information to persuade readers my point of view is right.

I believe people should not chop down trees  because we will not have oxygen to breathe. People destroy the animals home. There are lots of animals become extinct. The birds will migrate to another country. There will be no food for the poor people who live in the rainforest.
I believe that chopping down trees should not be allowed.
                                         By Sililo

Why is Cutting Down Trees Bad?

Learning Intention: I am learning to write a persuasive text using information to persuade readers my point of view is right.

I believe that people should not chop down trees because people will not have oxygen to breathe. People destroy animals' home. There are lots of animals become extinct. The birds will migrate to another country because we cut down their homes.
I believe that cutting down trees should not be allowed. 
                                                    By Nino

Why Is Cutting Down Trees Bad?

Learning Intention: I am learning to write a persuasive text using information to persuade readers my point of view is right.

I believe that cutting down trees is so bad because we will have no oxygen to breathe. People destroy the animals and birds' home.They will become extinct. Some of the birds will migrate to another country.The cave men will not have food and shelter. Also cutting down trees causes erosion. The soil will get washed away. We will get sunburn because we will have no shade. 
I believe that cutting down trees should not be allowed. 
                                                       By Daniel 

Why Is Cutting Trees Bad?

Learning Intention: I am learning to write a persuasive text using information to persuade readers my point of view is right.

I believe that people should not chop down trees because we will not have oxygen to breathe. People destroy animals' home. There are lots of animals become extinct. There will be no food for the poor people who live in the forests.
I believe that chopping down trees should not be allowed.
                                              By Alex  

Why is Cutting Down Trees Bad?

Learning Intention: I am learning to write a persuasive text using information to persuade readers my point of view is right.

People should not chop down trees because we will not have oxygen to breathe. People destroy the animals and birds' home. There are lots of  animals become extinct because of this. 

I believe that chopping down tress should not be allowed.

                                          By Johannah

Why Is Cutting Down Trees Bad?

Learning Intention: I am learning to write a persuasive text using information to persuade readers my point of view is right.

I believe that people should not chop down trees because the animals and birds will have no home. If we cut down the trees the animals will become extinct. There will be no oxygen for us to breathe. Also there will be no food for people who live in the rain forests.
I believe that cutting down trees should not be allowed. 
                                    By Madelyn