Friday, 23 June 2017

Our Autumn Tree

The Autumn Tree looks beautiful and colourful. Twirling, Twirling, Twirling leaves are falling from the autumn tree. The red and yellow, golden orange and brown leaves are gliding softly to the ground. Soon the branches will be bare.

                                                     by Sulia


  1. Hi Sulia,
    I love the way you described all the beautiful colours of the autumn tree, Well Done and keep it up!

  2. Hi Sulia, you have used a lot of descriptive words in your story about the the Autumn tree. It's leaves are beautiful colours and on its branches we can now see birds coming to it to sing their songs.
    Great writing Keep it up.

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