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Friday 23 June 2017

Our Autumn Tree


The Autumn Tree looks beautiful and colourful. Twirling, Twirling, Twirling leaves are falling from the autumn tree. The red and yellow, golden orange and brown leaves are gliding softly to the ground. Soon the branches will be bare.

                                                     by Sulia

Our Autumn Tree


The Autumn Tree looks colourful. The twirling Twirling Twirling leaves are falling from the autumn tree. The red and yellow gold and brown leaves are gliding softly to the ground. Soon the branches will be bare.
                                              By Madelyn

Our Autumn Tree


Our Autumn Tree looks colourful. The twirling  leaves are falling from the autumn tree. The red and yellow, gold and brown leaves are gliding and fluttering softly to the ground.  The autumn tree is losing its pretty leaves. Soon the branches will be bare.
                                                 By Sililo

                                                 

Our Autumn Tree


The autumn leaves are slowly softly falling to the ground. The golden and red, brown and yellow leaves look like a colourful carpet.
                                                           by Joyla
                                              
                                                         

Our Autumn Tree


The Autumn Tree looks colourful. The twirling, twirling, twirling leaves are falling from the autumn tree. The red and yellow, gold and brown leaves are gliding and fluttering softly to the ground. Soon the tree will be bare.

                                                        by Mika

Our Autumn Tree



Our Autumn Tree is colourful. Twirling Twirling leaves are falling from the autumn tree. The red and yellow and gold and brown leaves are gliding softly to the ground. Soon the branches will be bear.
                                                      by Johannah

Our Autumn Tree

The autumn leaves are falling slowly off the branches. They crunch under my feet. 

                                          By Justin

Our Autumn Tree


The Autumn Tree looks beautiful and colourful. The Twirling Twirling Twirling leaves are falling from the autumn tree. The red and gold and yellow and brown leaves are gliding, fluttering and floating softly to the ground. The autumn tree is slowly losing its pretty leaves. Soon the branches will be bare. There will be nothing left for them to wear.
                   
                                              By Daniel

Our Autumn Tree


Our Autumn Tree looks colourful. Twirling, twirling, twirling leaves are falling from the autumn tree. The yellow and gold, red and brown leaves are falling softly to the ground. Soon the branches will be bear.
                                                    By Isaac

Our Autumn Tree


Our Autumn Tree is beautiful and colourful. Twirling leaves are falling from the tree. The red and yellow, gold and brown leaves are falling to the ground. Soon the tree will be bare.

                                                   By Alex

Our Autumn Tree


Our Autumn Tree is beautiful and colourful. Twirling leaves are falling from the tree. The red and yellow, gold and brown leaves are falling to the ground. Soon the tree will be bare.

                                                   By Alex

Our Autumn Tree


Our Autumn Tree looks colourful. The leaves are twirling from the autumn tree. The red and yellow, gold and brown leaves are gliding and fluttering to the ground. Soon the tree will be bare.

                                                     by Nino

Our Autumn Tree


The autumn leaves fall twisting and twirling softly to the ground. Orange and red, yellow and brown, the leaves make a beautiful , colourful carpet on the ground.
                                                         by Laura

Our Autumn Tree





Learning Intention: We are learning to use describing words in our writing.

We brainstormed together some interesting words that we could use to describe our autumn tree. 

                                fluttering          softly
gliding        crimson-red         goldend orange
                        
                       AUTUMN TREE  
glowing              floating       falling   

twirling          slowly              colourful                   pretty                Red        Yellow   Fire-yellow


  

 Autumn Tree  Poem
Pretty, Pretty, Pretty leaves.
Falling from the autumn tree.
Red and yellow, golden orange and brown,
Floating and fluttering softly to the ground.
Glowing glowing tree
Slowly losing colourful leaves.
See the branches brown and bare
Nothing left for them to wear.
                                                       By Room 2