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Thursday, 28 September 2017

Father's Day

Learning intention: I am learning to write a recount .
Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can

  • write an orientation
  • write what I did in order
  • write how I feel 

On father's day my family and I went to Mac Donald to give my dad a surprise party.It was his birthday too. 
We ate crispy fries and burgers. I liked the burgers because it had my favourite lettuce, tomatoes, cucumber pickles and chicken. My dad said thank you for the party.
Then we went home and slept. We had a great party and everyone enjoyed it.
                                                    By Matalena

Rock Pool

Learning Intention: I am learning to name some  sea creatures in rock pools.

This is my rock pool. In my rock pool I have a crab and some sea shells. I have sea weeds and snake lock anemones.
                                                   By Matalena

Tuesday, 19 September 2017

Why Is Cutting Down Trees Bad?


Learning Intention: I am learning to write a persuasive text using information to persuade readers my point of view is right.

I believe that people should not chop down trees because we will not have oxygen to breathe. The animals and birds will have no home. They will become extinct. There will be no food for the poor people who live in the forest. 
I believe that we should not be allowed to cut down trees.
                                                   By Sulia

Why Is Cutting Down Trees Bad?

Learning Intention: I am learning to write a persuasive text using information to persuade readers my point of view is right.

I believe that people should not chop down trees because we will not have oxygen to breathe. The animals will have no home and they will become extinct. 
I believe that people should stop cutting down trees.
                                                By Mika

Why Is Cutting Down Trees Bad?

Learning Intention: I am learning to write a persuasive text using information to persuade readers my point of view is right.
I believe that people should not cut down trees because we will not have oxygen to breathe. There will be no home for the animals and birds. 
                                         By Alyvia

Why Is Cutting Down Trees Bad?

Learning Intention: I am learning to write a persuasive text using information to persuade readers my point of view is right.

I believe people should not cut down trees because we will have no oxygen to breathe. There will be no home for the animals. I believe cutting down trees should not be allowed.

                                                 By Joyla

Wednesday, 13 September 2017

Why Is Cutting Down Trees Bad?


Learning Intention: I am learning to write a persuasive text using information to persuade readers my point of view is right.

I believe that people should not cut down trees because the animals will have no home. We will not have oxygen to breathe. 
Please do not cut down trees.
                                                  By Justin