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Thursday, 30 May 2019

Our Autumn Tree


Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when we can describe our Autumn Tree using our five senses.

We have a huge Autumn Tree at School. The leaves are rustling in the wind. The colourful leaves are gliding softly to the ground. The leaves are fluttering in the breeze. The brown leaves are crunching under my feet.
                                                   By Marii

Our Autumn Tree


Learning goal: We are learning to write a descriptive text.
Success criteria: We can do this when we can describe our Autumn Tree using our five senses.

Our large Autumn Tree has leaves that are turning into glowing colours. They are red, orange, yellow, brown and gold. The wind is gently blowing the leaves and they are fluttering softly to the ground.

                                                      By Annamaria


Blowing Bubbles


Room 2 went outside to blow bubbles. They shone with rainbow colours. They floated up, up into the
sky. Then they went pop, pop, pop!
                                       
                                                     By Karlson


by Karlson

Blowing Bubbles

In Room 2 we went  outside to blow bubbles. The bubbles went up, up, up, into the sky. They were shining in the bright sun.
                                                    By Zenalia

Monday, 10 December 2018

Why Littering At the Beach is Bad?

Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.
Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can express my point of view and support it with evidence. 

I believe that littering at the beach is nasty. When people leave their old fishing nets in the sea the turtles get tangled in it and they die. The plastic bags are horrible because it get stuck over the heads of the turtles and other sea creatures . They suffocate and die. 
I believe that people should pick up their rubbish and take it home. We need a clean and safe beach for everyone to enjoy.
                                                        By Joyla. 

Why Littering At The Beach Is Bad?

Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.
Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can express my point of view and support it with evidence. 

I believe that littering at the beach is nasty.  When people throw their plastic bags at the beach the get stuck over the heads of the sea creatures. They suffocate and die. The fishing lines and fishing nets get tangled around their neck. They will drown and die.
I suggest that people should show respect to our environment by taking their rubbish home. 
                                                                         By Alyvia

Why Littering at the Beach is Bad?

Learning Goal: We are learning to write a persuasive text.
Success criteria: I know I can do this when I can express my point of view and support it with evidence. 

I believe that littering at the beach is horrible because when you leave old fishing nets in the sea the turtles will get tangled in it and they will die. The plastic bags are nasty because it gets stuck over the heads of the turtles and other sea creatures. They suffocate and they will drown. 
I suggest that people should respect the beach by taking their rubbish  home.
                                                                By Eldrich