Tuesday, 8 May 2018

The Noisy Traffic

Learning goalWe are learning to write a descriptive text.

Success criteria: We can do this when we can use describing  words.
There are lots of cars going very fast past our school. The speeding cars look like they are flying. It looks very dangerous. The noisy traffic makes it hard to hear the teacher. I can smell the petrol as the cars roar past us. I can taste the smoke in my mouth. When the heavy trucks go past the ground is shaking like an earthquake.

                                                 By Joyla

1 comment:

  1. Hi,Joyla
    I like the way you describe your work about the noisy traffic,well done keep it up.